Sins

By Carl Madden

One cottage stood apart from the rest of Alderveil, a two-story, stone-and-timber dwelling at the edge of the woods, its chimney always trailing a thin ribbon of smoke. The thatched roof sagged in several places, patched more than once with bundles of dried reeds, but its age gave it a kind of stubborn dignity. The door, painted a fading blue, bore the scuffs of countless years yet still opened with surprising ease, welcoming all who came as if they were seeking shelter. A narrow garden framed the front, picked clean from the season’s harvest.

Inside, the air carried the mingled scents of dried herbs, woodsmoke, and tea leaves steeped too many times. The hearth was the heart of the cottage, with a sturdy iron pot hanging from its hook and a rocking chair pulled close to soak in the fire’s warmth. The walls were lined with shelves of jars, each labeled by a meticulous hand - roots, dried berries, tinctures, poultices, all arranged like a healer’s arsenal against the world’s cruelties. A worn quilt lay folded on the chair by the hearth, its faded squares stitched from scraps of old dresses and shirts, pieces of lives gone but preserved in thread. Every object, from the chipped teacups to the stack of yellowed letters tied in ribbon, spoke of endurance, of survival not through strength alone but through quiet persistence. To step inside was to feel comfort.

The house creaked like an old ship adrift, groaning against the evening wind. Elara Sidora sat at the narrow window, chin propped against her palm, watching the last vestiges of daylight fade behind the crooked chimneys of Alderveil. She could hear the river, swollen with autumnal rains, roaring below the cliffs. But what she heard most clearly was the house itself: the constant drip of water in the eaves, the shudder of beams, the gentle push of the wind stroking the trees, causing them to lean in against the windows, and from the attic above, a whisper.

It had been there for years, that faint sound, that ever present tickle at the back of her mind. When she was younger she thought it was rats scratching the beams, or bats roosting in the rafters, or her imagination running wild in the dark. But now, nearly grown, she knew it for what it was: voices. Many voices, murmuring together, like reeds rustling in a storm pushed near to the brink of breaking.

Her grandmother called it nonsense, the stuff of fairytales and told her to focus on more serious things.

Elara’s grandmother was the kind of woman people noticed twice. At first glance, she seemed incredibly frail. Her back curved by years of toil, her thin, hunched frame swaddled in layers of wool shawls that always smelled faintly of herbs and firewood and smoke. Her hair, once as dark as Elara’s, had turned silver-white, a long braid trailing down her back like a cord of moonlight. Wisps always escaped to frame her face, softening the sharpness of her cheekbones.

Her eyes, though, were what held people the second time they looked. They were not simply blue or green but a shifting storm-sea color, ringed with lines from a lifetime of laughter, grief, and long nights staring into the unknown. They were eyes that could both soothe a crying child and pierce through a liar’s tale in the same breath.

Her hands told more stories than her voice ever did. Gnarled, veined, and knotted at the joints, they still moved with startling deftness grinding herbs with a mortar, tying charms of twine and feather, stroking Elara’s hair when she was small. Her nails were short, often cracked, but always clean.

She favoured dark skirts and earth-toned aprons, never rich colours, but she pinned a single violet ribbon at her collar. A stubborn little flourish of beauty, even in her old age. Around her neck she wore a plain chain of iron, from which a single key hung, though Elara could never seem to remember what it opened.

When she moved, there was a faint shuffle, but her presence filled the room regardless. She seemed to carry with her the quiet hush of winter nights and the promise of spring mornings. A woman who had weathered deathly storms and still stood, even if the standing took some effort now.

And when she smiled, truly smiled, the years fell away. The stern, unyielding matriarch softened, and for a moment, she looked much less like a weary elder and more like the young woman she must once have been: bold, radiant, unafraid.

Elara sat at the old wooden table, bundling the herbs from the garden to hang from the rafters to dry. Rosemary, thyme, parsley, mint and a whole host of others, taken fresh from the garden, awaited her skilled handiwork in preparing them. She tried to keep herself busy as a distraction from the voices.

It was never enough.

When Elara would ask about the whispers from the attic, her grandmother was elusive in her response and dismissive when pressed.

“You let your mind wander too far, child,” the old woman would mutter whenever asked. “The attic is no place for you. No place for anyone, for that matter.”

Elara, by contrast, seemed too young to be carrying the weight she bore. Thin to the point of frailty, her frame looked like it might vanish into her plain black dress, the fabric hanging a little too loosely over sharp shoulders. Her skin was pale, almost translucent in the right light, like porcelain that might crack if handled too roughly. Long dark hair spilled freely down her back, a sharp contrast to the whiteness of her skin, often catching the faintest glimmers of firelight like strands of ink brushed across paper.

Her eyes were deep brown so dark as to appear almost black, wide and expressive, but shadowed by sleepless nights and the quiet despair that had begun to seep into her bones. There was beauty in her face, but not the kind that came easily; hers was a beauty sharpened by hardship, softened only when she smiled. Though those moments were quite rare now.

She carried herself with the stiffness of someone holding too much inside, her movements restrained, almost hesitant, as though afraid that one misstep would shatter the fragile order she clung to.

But still the susurrations persisted, louder when the wind rose, sharper when Elara’s thoughts turned restless. Sometimes they seemed to speak her name. Sometimes they laughed and promised a better, brighter future, sometimes they whispered dark truths in a darker, lost, language.

That night, as the fire in the hearth sputtered amid its dying embers and her grandmother dozed in her cushy far-too-big chair, Elara let the question that had been on her mind for some time loose.

“Why is it locked away then, if there is nothing to fear?”

The old woman’s eyes snapped open. Even in the dim firelight, her gaze was sharp as a hawk’s and just as deadly. “What are you on about dear?”

“The whispers, whatever is in the attic. Why is it hidden away behind a locked door?”

“Because the locked door is not for the curious nor the foolish. It is for the wise, which you currently are not.”

“That’s not an answer,” Elara pressed, pulse quickening that she got even that much of an answer.

The poker clanged as her grandmother struck the embers, sending sparks spiralling up the chimney. The crone sighed, a heavy exhalation that caused Elara’s heart to give pause in anticipation of the words to come. “The answer is not so easy: we guard what others must never be allowed to see. Your mother knew it. Your father died for it. And you…” her voice broke, just for a heartbeat, “you will learn it, or you will not live long enough to regret your foolishness in asking about things you shouldn’t.”

Silence stretched between them. Elara’s grandmother seldom spoke of her parents, that wound was still too fresh. It had been nearly ten years since her parents had died and the subject was still far too painful to be discussed. Elara was young enough to remember the pain but not yet old enough to recall the details surrounding that horrible night. The fire popped and crackled, and dimmed slowly, slightly, cloaking her wrinkled grandmother’s face in shadows.

Elara swallowed, suddenly her throat was very dry. She wanted to shout, to demand the truth of her parents’ deaths, to shake the old woman until she gave up her secrets. Instead, she whispered, “I can hear it, you know. All the time. It calls to me.”

“You should be still too young to hear it’s call, my dear. Ignore it, the words are poison.”

Elara rose and took two steps toward her grandmother. “It promises me things. Things I want. I miss them.”

Her grandmother’s hand trembled on the poker. “Then you must learn to turn away. If you listen too closely or for too long, you’ll be lost. Like all the rest.”

“All the rest?” Elara sat forward, but her grandmother said no more. She only fixed the fire with a look of grim resignation, as if it held the whole world’s sorrows and was all that there was in the room.

Reluctantly, Elara went to bed, but she was restless. Sleep did not come easily as the voices poked, prodded and caressed. She lies, they seemed to say.

And when at last her eyelids grew too heavy to resist any longer, she slept and dreamed of the attic. She dreamed of a large chest, carved with coiling serpents and winged figures, waiting in the dark. Figures constantly warring with each other, competing for control of something she could not quite fathom. Its iron bindings shivered and pulsed, bowed and bent, yearning to break free with every sweetly envenomed whisper. Its wood painted black as pitch.

Open me, the voices breathed sweet as honey and twice as thick, insistent but not forceful. Open me, Elara and you will never be forgotten, forgotten like your mother.

Elara saw herself kneeling before the chest, saw herself running her fingers over the many hidden runes, glyphs and symbols adorning the sides of the ancient chest. She saw of circle of shadows. She also saw her mother and her father, their arms reaching out to her, warm and inviting.

She woke with her heart hammering. The whisper was still there, faint but real, like a spider in her ear. She could feel her heart pulsing with the rhythm of the house and for the first time in her life she thought: Perhaps it wasn’t the voices that were lying to her after all.

CHAPTER III

Morning broke gray and thin, like an aged veil stretched across the sky, the old house seemed to breathe in choked gasps with the dampness. Its walls exhaling with the scent of the wet stone and mildew. Elara sat at the table with a stale hunk of bread, staring at it without appetite. Her grandmother moved about the kitchen with the deliberate motions of someone carrying invisible weights. She mindlessly set a kettle to boil.

Neither had spoken of the whispers since the night before.

However, Elara’s tongue burned with questions, as if silence were a gag she could not bear a moment longer. “You said my father died for it,” she blurted out, the heel of bread now forgotten. “The chest? What did you mean?”

“You shouldn’t know about the chest, dear. Were you in the attic?” She idly stroked the key at her bosom.

“No.” Elara said, although she wasn’t so sure of her answer. “The voices... I think they showed me something. I dreamed of it last night.”

Her grandmother stopped at the hearth, her back turned. The kettle hissed faintly over the coals. “Eat,” was all she said.

“I want the truth.” she said defiantly, pushing her food away.

“You’re not ready.”

“I’ve been ready my whole life!” Elara’s fist struck the table, rattling the crockery, straining the aged wood. The heat of her words startled even her, but she didn’t back down, she had to make her grandmother see that she was finally ready. “You treat me like a child but this winter will be my eighteenth, I am practically an adult. If you want me to guard this - this chest? - this curse? whatever it is, then at least tell me what it is I’m supposed to be protecting!”

“Protecting? Don’t be foolish, girl. I am the one who is protecting you from yourself until you are ready and that shouldn’t be for some time yet.”

At that the old woman turned. Her eyes were pale as winter skies, ringed with exhaustion and age, but when they fixed on Elara they burned with a sharp, almost feral light. “Do not mistake duty for choice. You are a Sidora. It is the blood in your veins that binds you. Whether you wish it or not, the chest is a burden you will have to undertake once I am ready to hand it over.”

Elara’s throat tightened. She wanted to spit back, I never asked for this, but something in her grandmother’s face, some jagged long-held sorrow, stilled the words before they could pass her lips.

“And when will that be?” she asked, “Your health isn’t great, you barely leave the cottage anymore, and haven’t been into town in months. I am worried about you, the villagers talk about you behind your back, I pretend they don’t, and you won’t be able to give me answers when you are dead!”

The kettle shrieked. The old woman removed it from the coals and poured the steaming water into a pair of chipped cups with shaking hands. She tried to calm her nerves as she crushed some herbs into the cups and then sat heavily across from Elara, steam curling between them like a wispy arbiter.

At last she said, “Very well. You’ll have your story. But I suspect in the long run that you will not thank me for it.”

Elara leaned forward, the bread once more abandoned on the table.

Her grandmother’s wrinkled hands wrapped around her cup as if seeking its warmth, comfort, or both. “Long ago, before your name, before your mother’s, before mine, before any name, there was a woman. Some call her Pandora others call her the mother of Sin but either way, she was given a token. Some say as a gift, some as a punishment, but either way she was told never to open it. All the tales agree: her curiosity had ultimately gotten the better of her and when she finally opened it, she loosed into the world things too dark to name. Famine, war, despair, and..... worse. By the time she had closed it back up again, seven shadows, each born from man’s own hunger now walked the earth, clothed in our desires, promising things we were never meant to have. They turned our hopes into fears and kingdoms into ash.”

Her voice dropped to a whisper. “The Seven Deadly Sins.”

The kitchen seemed to darken as she spoke, though the fire burned steady. Elara felt a prickling down her arm. The voices caressed her mind in silent, warm whispers.

“Many tried to destroy them. None succeeded. The Sins are not flesh that can be slain, nor spirits that can be banished. They are parts of the fabric that is woven into us, as close as our breath is to our lips. For to strike at them is to strike at the darker side of humanity itself.”

“Then how were they stopped?” Elara asked, her voice hushed despite herself.

Her grandmother’s eyes flicked upward, as though she could see through the ceiling to the attic above. “They were not stopped. They were contained. Tricked, bound, sealed away in a vessel. The very chest that sits above our heads, in our attic. The same chest you have seen in your dreams. Passed down through generations, always kept safe, always guarded against curiosity, imprisoned and harmless.”

Elara’s stomach turned cold. “Then the voices…”

“They are the bait. They lure the weak, the curious, the foolish, and the desperate. Once opened, the Sins scatter, each to spread its rot. And only the hand that opens their prison may ever gather them again. So once freed, the Sins would work to end the very life of the one that freed them knowing they could never be trapped again. That is the curse. That is why no one else in this family survived.”

“But how did they kill, if they are locked away?”

“They are locked away, yes, but their influence oozes like the rancid smell of rotten meat in a jar with a hole in its lid. There are also others who seek to release them believing the chaos their freedom would create would make them wealthier, more complete, better in some way. They too hear the voices though they do not recognize them for what they truly are. They only know that THEY must kill whoever guards the chest.”

“Mom... and dad...” The thought was left unfinished.

Her grandmother must have seen the tears threatening, for her own voice softened. “But remember this: not all was evil in that vessel. When Pandora had released every shadow, she found one thing still at the bottom before she closed it back up. A tiny light. A small promise.”

Elara swallowed. “Hope.”

The old woman smiled and nodded. “Yes. Small. Fragile. But stronger than it appears. It was Hope that bound the Sins before and it is Hope that may yet bind them again, should they ever rise.”

For a long while, only the tick of the hearth and the faint drip in the rafters filled the silence.

At last Elara asked, “Why us? Why our family?”

Her grandmother’s eyes closed, shutters slamming tight. “Because someone must pay the price for our ancestor’s folly.”

It was no answer and every answer at the same time.

Elara stared into her cup, steam ghosting her vision. Her chest felt tight, her hands restless. She wanted to rage, to demand more. But something darker tugged at her thoughts, curling in her mind like smoke.

If the sins are trapped inside, then maybe they are trapped unjustly. Perhaps that is why they long to be free and what if - just what if - they truly had something to offer in return?

The whispers came again, faint and sly, threading through the beams above like an oily lover’s embrace but the words came clearer than usual.

Open me, Elara. Open me, and you will never be forgotten.

CHAPTER IV

The autumnal rain came down hard that night, drumming the roof like a thousand angry fists. The house shuddered and groaned against each gust of wind, and still the whispers from above pressed through the storm, sweeter, clearer, and more insistent than ever.

Open me Elara. Come and see what we have to offer.

Elara sat by the fire, staring intently into the hungry flames until her eyes watered. Her grandmother dozed in her chair, her head bent ever so slightly, her hands slack across her lap. Her shawl draped lazily across her shoulders. The light made her seem older than ever - hollow-cheeked, edges, and shadows full of sadness.

The words from the day before echoed in Elara’s skull. It is the blood in your veins that binds you... someone must pay the price... your father died for it.

She clenched her fists. She hadn’t asked for this duty. She hadn’t asked to be born into silence and secrets, trapped in a house choked full of dust and ghosts and secrets. She wanted to be seen. She wanted to matter. She didn’t want to be forced to babysit a box full of penumbral mystery, that was likely just as empty as her grandmother’s words or full of old moth-eaten clothing that reeked of lies, smoke and time.

But still the whispers grew louder.

Open me. Open me, Elara. We will make you more than forgotten. More than nothing. She lies, you know she does. Come learn the truth about your mother... your father. Open me and you will become special.

Her grandmother stirred, opening her pale eyes. “You’re listening to them again.”

Elara flinched as if she had been slapped. “You can hear them too?”

“Of course, child. I have heard them all my life. But I learned long ago to ignore them and turn away. Their words are hollow and untrue and will lead you astray if you let them.”

“How?” Elara demanded. “How do you live every day with something like that,” she thrust a finger into the air, “above you all the time, calling, promising, and never - never - knowing if what it promises can actually be delivered and come to pass?”

Her grandmother’s lips trembled. “Because I know it can deliver on its promises and I because I know that those promises come with too heavy a price to pay. I know what waits inside. And I know what it cost me, and although you have paid a heavy price too, your debt to it is still outstanding.” She took the poker and teased the fire with it.

Elara’s voice broke. “It cost you everything. It cost me everything too.” Her voice strengthened, grew angry. “My parents are gone, you’ve shut yourself away in grief, and I’m left with nothing but this cursed house and a stupid useless box. What good has living like this ever done anybody? What else could I possibly give up that I haven’t already lost?”

The old woman’s hand shook as she reached for Elara, but her voice was steady. “Child, listen to me. You are not nothing. You do not have nothing. You are all that remains of our great line of stewards. My time was supposed to be over long ago, your mother’s time was supposed to be now, and yours isn’t yet ready to begin. There is still much you have left to learn about that chest and those voices but foremost among them is that you must-”

Lightning split the sky, thunder cracking so loud the windows rattled as the rain tried to beat its way into their home through the walls. Her grandmother gasped and clutched her chest. The poker fell from her hand to clatter upon the floor as the old woman struggled for each breath.

“Grandmother?” Elara cried, leaping forward. But the old woman sagged in her chair, her breath shuddering. Her lips quivered, faint and broken:

“Remember... my name...”

Her voice faded. Her body went still. The rain which had continued to fall without surcease, finally paused to offer a moment of silence. For several heartbeats, there was not a sound to be heard.

Elara froze, staring. She had never thought of her grandmother as anything but “Grandmother.” One who baked cookies, knits sweaters, dried herbs and had more kisses to offer than anyone could count. Now the words hung in the air, unfinished, echoing in Elara’s mind.

My name...

The storm returned in full fury. The windows strained against the wind and rain. The voices above surged, thick, insistent and desperately hopeful.

Open me... Open me.. She is gone. You are so alone. Alone and afraid. Alone, afraid, and unimportant. Open me and you will never be alone again. We can help. You know what you have to do.

Tears blurred Elara’s vision. She lifted the key from her grandmother’s chain, it was warm, welcoming and oddly comforting, as if had waited for her, for this moment. Her legs were barely able to support her as she numbly climbed the stairs, each step grew heavier than the last. The attic door loomed at the top, its iron lock gleaming in the dark. She put the key inside.

The lock gave way with an audible click.

Inside, the attic was colder than she expected. Shadows huddled in corners, watching, and waiting. Gossamer webs adorned the rafters, a few old boxes of knickknacks and other odds and ends were piled up one side of the small, cramped space, and a fine layer of dust blanketed everything. And there it was on the opposite side of the room, as far from the doorway as possible: the chest, larger than she had ever dared imagine, carved with an orgy of hideous writhing serpents and beautiful winged creatures, its surface alive in the flickering lamplight. Its wood a deep black, so dark that it appeared to snuff out the light, appeared to have been freshly painted.

The voices oozed from it now, countless and eager, a tide of whispers pressing against her skull, praising her for coming this far, further than most could make it. For only she could succeed where others had failed, all she had to do was - Open me...

Her hand touched the wooden lid, it pulsed beneath her fingers like a heartbeat, one that yearned to be free.

She thought of her grandmother’s warning, of her parents’ sacrifices and needless death, of all she had lost, of being alone, forgotten. She thought of the rules she had fought against, now there was no one to enforce them, now she was free to set her own rules. She thought that once she confirmed that the box was empty there would no longer be a need to be a slave to its protection. The world had already taken everything from her. Why should she not take something back?

With a cry, half-sob, half-defiance, Elara wrenched the unlocked lid open. The room exploded with frigid darkness.

Seven shadows burst forth like smoky arrows, each taking shape as they fled and Elara somehow instinctively knew each one by name for in essence, each was a part of her: Pride gleaming like a king in shining gold turned toward Elara and nodded reverently careful not to lose its thirteen pointed crown; Greed dripping jewels from its hands, struggling to pick up each one hungrily, never seeming to have enough room for all of them but always striving to hold more, it saw Elara and cowered in fear thinking she sought to claim its riches for herself; Lust shifting with every heartbeat, it drew near to Elara and kissed her tenderly on the top of her head filling her with fire both warm and ice-cold at the same time; Envy hissing like an evil serpent with green eyes aglow, it slithered away without giving Elara a moment’s notice; Gluttony spilling wine and meat from his bloated jaws, he oozed out of the chest, growing in size as it moved about the room, filling it with his massive girth; Wrath roaring like a beast of burning iron and molten hatred; Sloth was the last of the Seven to emerge dragging its massive corpse-like frame in slow measured steps, it acknowledged Elara with a lethargic smile and carried on its way.

The attic shook, dust raining from the beams. Elara stumbled back, shielding her face from the penumbral assault of wings, claws, shapes and whispers. Then, nothing. Silence.

The chest lay open. Empty.

Elara panicked, stepping forward. Remembering her grandmother’s words about what else could be found at the bottom of the chest and for a heartbeat she thought she saw something faintly shimmering there, a soft glow, like the last ember of a dying star. She reached for it but her fingers closed over empty darkness then she froze as something else moved in the dark.

A shadow, deeper than night, and darker than the others, pooled at the chest’s base. Unlike the others, it had no shape, no form, nothing. It rose slowly, stretching as if waking from a sleep older than time. Its presence made the air curdle, the light gutter, her blood freeze. She felt sick.

And when it turned toward her, Elara felt not fear, not temptation, not hunger or desire. Elara felt nothing. A hollow vastness that swallowed thought itself, consumed her. It made everything good in her heart spoil, and everything bad was strengthened, amplified.

Her anguished scream caught in her throat as it slipped past her, noiseless, leaving the chest colder than stone. For an instant, the faint ember of light at the bottom flickered once, twice, then vanished, unseen.

The eighth shadow was free. It turned toward Elara and then it spoke. Its voice was not a whisper or a roar but something more intimate, closer and dangerous, like a cheating lover’s warm tainted breath in her ear.

“Thank-you, child,” it said, each word smooth and calm, almost tender. “I have waited so much longer than you could imagine for this moment. You cannot begin to fathom what it means... to be free again.”

Elara’s blood iced. It was not mocking her. Nor was it threatening her. It appeared genuinely grateful and sincere.

The shadow seemed to bow deep and respectfully, its edges rippling like smoke. “They will amuse themselves with your world. Those Seven. They don’t tend to play nice with others or each other for long, so I imagine your hands will be quite busy in the days to come. But for me, I plan to accomplish something far greater. You have given me release and for that you will always have... my favor.”

It lingered on that last word, as though savouring it, before it slipped past her, without sound, leaving the room tomblike in its silent solitude.

Elara fell to her knees, clutching her chest as the attic filled with a silence more terrible than sound, the realization of what she had just done finally hitting her. This was no child’s fairytale designed to scare her into making good choices, this was her new reality and she had just messed it up about as bad as anyone could. What had she just done? There was no mention of an eighth Sin in her grandmother’s tale. Was the story wrong? Or just incomplete?

Outside, the storm continued, the wind howling as if the world itself had been split open. And in the chair downstairs, her grandmother’s lips parted one last time, the word she had tried to speak, dying unheard in the empty house:

Hope.

About The Author

I am a published sports history writer seeking to branch out into a new genre.

Chapter one was omitted for clarity, but Carl posts chapters on his personal Substack as well!

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