The First Draft Rescue Kit
For writers standing knee-deep in the beautiful wreckage of a messy draft and don’t know what to do with it
There is a particular kind of despair that only arrives after you have written something. Not before.
Before, there is possibility. Before, the idea is still glowing somewhere in your head, perfect and untouched. Before, the essay is devastating, the poem is elegant. The story has a pulse, the characters are alive. The argument is sharp. The ending will certainly ruin someone’s life in the best possible way.
And then you write it down.
And suddenly the thing that felt so luminous inside your mind looks, unfortunately, like it has been dragged through a muddy hedge.
I have begun revising my first draft recently, two years after I wrote it. I wrote it with no outline in just over two months—and you can tell. The sentences are clumsy. The structure is strange. The middle collapses. The emotional climax appears three paragraphs too early and then happens again for no reason. The opening is trying very hard to be profound. The ending has wandered off into the woods.
And naturally, because writers are very calm and reasonable people, we assume this means we are bad at writing and should give up.
Obviously, this is not true. It does not mean your work is a mess. It means you have a first draft, and that is absolutely something to celebrate.
Anne Lamott argues in Bird by Bird that almost all good writing begins with bad first efforts, and writing teachers have been trying to convince us of this for decades: a draft is not supposed to be the finished thing. It is supposed to be the place where the finished thing begins to reveal itself.
Revision is not punishment. It is not proof that you failed. It is the actual work. Because you have to make it exist in order to make it good.
Purdue OWL describes revision as a stage where writers return to the draft with distance, often after taking a break, so they can see the piece more clearly. Writing centres often separate “higher order concerns,” like purpose, structure, development, and audience, from “lower order concerns,” like grammar and sentence polish, because fixing commas before you know what the piece is about is a little like decorating a house that may still need a foundation.
So this is your rescue kit. Not for making your draft perfect. For making it feel possible again. For looking at the strange, half-feral thing you made and saying: okay, beloved disaster, what are you going to become?
Before You Decide the Draft Is Dead
Most writers reread their drafts as though they are building a case against themselves. They open the document and immediately begin collecting evidence.
This sentence is bad.
This paragraph is pointless.
This metaphor is embarrassing.
This transition is missing.
This whole thing is probably unsalvageable.
And then, they give up.
And yes, sometimes the draft is messy—often it is extremely messy. Sometimes it has the clarity of a junk drawer and often you come across a scene you had no idea you wrote. Rereading with shame does not make you more objective, It usually blinds you to what is actually there.
Shame is loud. It does not edit well. Before you revise, you need to change the task. You are not rereading to decide whether you are talented. You need to read it like a loved one wrote it, and you are rereading to gather information.
Try this:
Print the draft or open it in a different format, somewhere you can add notes without actually changing the document (my friends and I often use google docs and add a second account we can add as a “commenter” so we aren’t compelled to change anything).
Sometimes to separate yourself from the work you need to alter how it looks. Change the font if it helps you separate yourself from the work. Read it somewhere you do not usually write. Anything that helps your brain stop seeing it as “the thing I failed at” and start seeing it as a piece of new material.
Then read the whole draft once without changing anything. No fixing. No rewriting. No deleting the entire opening in a fit of editorial violence.
Just read.
In the margins or comments, write observations, not insults.
Instead of:
“This is terrible.”
Write:
“This is unclear.”
“This is trying to say something about grief.”
“This paragraph repeats the previous one.”
“This image feels important.”
“I got bored here, it drags on.”
“This is where the piece actually starts.”
“This sentence knows what the essay is about.”
Your first reread should not be an execution. It should be a diagnostic. You are not asking, “Is this good?” You are asking, “What is here?” That question is much kinder. It is also much more useful.
One-Sentence Wonder
One thing that is helpful is to find the heart or theme of your story. When people ask “what is your book about” most writers in their first few drafts look like a deer in the headlights, and it is either an “uhhh… I don’t know” or “rambling on about the plot for far too long.
One of my favourite tools for writers is a simple, stupid sentence to describe your novel. It can be ridiculous and funny but it helps you find the heart.
For example, Lord of the Rings is short kings doing too much cardio.
The Great Gatsby is about a guy throwing parties to impress his crush but it goes terribly.
My novel, Beneath The Floating Isles, is about a girl who was too angry to remain mortal.
Please, feel free to leave more options in the comments, because we love to read them.
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